I got no comments on my last elevator pitch so I didn't have too much to go off of but I got it done and adapted a little to it so hopefully this one is just as fire as my last.
Hi John, I really enjoyed listening to and watching your second elevator pitch. Your product is definitely something that almost every Gainesville bar customers would appreciate. While I never saw your first elevator pitch, you were extremely well-spoken and professional in this one. The only thing that I would maybe improve on is the background as the dresser and objects were slightly distracting.
Hi John,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed listening to and watching your second elevator pitch. Your product is definitely something that almost every Gainesville bar customers would appreciate. While I never saw your first elevator pitch, you were extremely well-spoken and professional in this one. The only thing that I would maybe improve on is the background as the dresser and objects were slightly distracting.