22A- Elevator Pitch No. 3
The main response that I got from the feedback is that the background and my clothing were not up to par so I went back to the basics and did something similar to my original elevator pitch that I felt was a little bit more business-like and was able to represent my ideas and thoughts a little bit better. I feel like this presentation in general is a lot more professional and it shows what I am trying to sell in a better light than my last one. This is supposed to be a professional pitch and I think in my last video I lacked some of the professional aspects that come with it that I made up for with this one. It was a lot more comfortable doing this one and I felt more of myself in what I was doing.
Hey John,
ReplyDeleteYour video is "Video is unavailable" according to my screen. I would love to see it but I trust that you got to change a bit off of your last feedback. I'm glad you changed your attire, it's important to be well dressed when making impressions during an elevator pitch. It's also good to hear that you were more comfortable and I'm sure that helped the flow of your pitch.